comedy

The Tart

In mid-February, I started developing six premises into scripts for It’s My Shout; hoping multiple submissions would increase my chances of selection. My plan worked! And yesterday, it was officially announced that one of my scripts, Tha’s What I ‘Eard, will be produced by It’s My Shout and broadcast on the BBC (my first industry credit). You’ll have to wait until September to see that, but I plan to share the other five scripts before then. The first of which is The Tart. The Tart was the easiest to write as it was adapted from a segment of my feature-length script, The Darning Needle; my favourite segment as it features the best and most comical dialogue and the character of the protagonist, Elissa, really shines through. However, I think The Tart improved on the segment as it allowed me to introduce new setups and payoffs, which also allowed for even more comedy and strong character moments for Elissa.

Synopsis

Elissa’s dream is to be a rock star, and she has the personality and creativity to achieve it, but those who should be encouraging her, only suppress her; forcing her into either isolating herself or acting out. But when pushed too far, Elissa makes her final act one to remember.

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Marching Orders

I wrote Marching Orders at the beginning of last year as a contender to be filmed and submitted to Cardiff Mini Film Festival 2017 in the One Minute Wonder category. It just missed out on being shot by me, but after joining the filmmaking group Film Focus Wales, I offered it to them, and it was taken on by talented, up-and-coming director, Nat Pearse. I’m hugely satisfied with the results and will be looking for Nat and Film Focus to film more of my scripts in future. The film attempts to show how a positive attitude can affect those around you, and a negative one can do just the same. I myself am extremely positive about Marching Orders and its chances for selection for this year’s Cardiff Mini Film Festival!

The Darning Needle

Here’s an extract from my feature film script, The Darning Needle. The Darning Needle has been with me a long time; originally writing the treatment for my MA. Since then it’s gone through many drafts, and the story and themes have altered as I’ve changed my perspectives on things and my writing ability has developed. In its final form, it follows the protagonist Elissa as she’s held back from achieving her dreams by the selfish motivations of those around her (even those closest to her). I’ve decided not to continue with further drafts as, as I’ve mentioned, it has been through many changes over a long period of time, and I think it better to start afresh with new works that can benefit from a purer, more focused vision.

Toast

Toast is a script I wrote as a possible contender to be filmed for Cardiff Mini Film Festival. It ended up being rejected in favour of other scripts as its plot was more complex and it would require a more elaborate production: the festival favours simplicity. It’s a comedy about how lack of communication and pent-up feelings lead to antagonism. It’s, in a way, a reboot (well, they are in fashion) of an earlier film, The Housemate from Hell. There is much I still admire about that film. In particular, its themes of suppressed anxiety (that weren’t intentional, but I’ve since recognised), and as my ability has developed greatly in the four years since its conception, I felt I could write a more focused and efficient script in a similar vein.

Tell Me About It, Sam

Tell Me About It, Sam (script) was inspired by a real-life incident, in which I met a man who seemed to know me and proceeded to have a long conversation with me about his personal life even though I hadn’t a clue who he was. I thought it was an ideal concept for a comedy film for Cardiff Mini Film Festival as it could take place in a single location – on a bench – and provided the opportunity for a punchline/twist ending. I felt the best method of filming would be a three-camera setup, covering the action from all angles so we could run through the whole script in one take. To do this, I would require actors who could learn all their lines; a skill surprisingly lacking in actors solely working in film. Therefore, I cast two experienced theatre actors who I had seen perform multiple times, and who had displayed impressive skill as a comedy double act.

Synopsis

Unexpectedly, Sam turns counsellor to an old friend with relationship problems, or at least he thinks he’s an old friend, but for the life of him, he can’t remember his name!

Additional: Since my original post, Tell Me About It, Sam has been nominated for best Comedy at Cardiff Mini Film Festival 2017 and selected for St Neots Film Festival 2017.

Goldfish

Inspired to produce something simple to suit Cardiff Mini Film Festival’s criteria, I wrote Goldfish; a script based around the protagonist’s confined environment. It illustrates how you can miss out on life by not breaking from routine; paralleling the life of the protagonist stuck in his tiny flat with that of his goldfish. Although the premise was simple, I felt the production would benefit from some expert lighting and colour grading to further highlight these parallels and enhance the slightly surreal tone. For this purpose, I brought on board Steven Owen, whose lighting served Bamboo House so well, and his associate Jack Longley. Both proved invaluable.

Synopsis

Huw lives a life of routine, never leaving the familiar environment of his flat. In an odd break from tradition, it’s up to his pet goldfish, Gil, to put an end to his static lifestyle.

Additional: Since my original post, Goldfish has been selected for Loch Ness Film Festival 2017, Nightpiece Film Festival 2017, Hellfire Short Film Festival’s 12th Round 2017, Brighton Rocks Film Festival 2018 and The Short Film Show 2018, shortlisted for best Adult Fiction at St Neots Film Festival 2017, nominated in the One Minute Wonder category at Cardiff Mini Film Festival 2017 and for both best Fantasy and best Original Content at Nottingham International Microfilm Festival 2018, and reached the finals of the Oniros Film Awards August 2017!

The Prophet

The Prophet (script) was inspired by an old parable I came across on the Internet:

“A man said to the Prophet, ‘give me advice.’ The Prophet said, ‘do not get angry.’ The man asked repeatedly, and the Prophet answered each time, ‘do not get angry.'”

I found the parable amusing as the man persistently questions the Prophet even though he’s already given his answer, seeming like he’s attempting to aggravate him and get him to contradict himself. This was the basis for the film. I also incorporated subtext about the irrationality of having an unquestionable text and the hypocrisy of religious violence.

Synopsis

A modern-day prophet has some sage advice for an inquisitive young man, but he’s not about to take it without question.

Additional: Since my original post, The Prophet has been selected for Brighton Rocks Film Festival 2018 and Short to the Point November 2017, and won the One Minute Wonder category at Cardiff Mini Film Festival 2017!